Audience feedback

After viewing our film in various ways, we have recieved constructive critism for ways to improve our film. The most popular answers were:

• The note cannot be read as the scene is not long enough
• The live typing of our characters thoughts is too slow
• The friends scene, with our character seated at the base of a tree with her friends in the distance is not long enough

We will discuss as a group and consider making these or any other alterations and then re-upload our final piece.